Based on the feedback that i received from my classmates from my peer review , got some ideas on my thesis statement. My classmates also explain to me that i have a lot of information and a lot of details to work with and to put into  my letter. They basically showed me what i was missing to have a great paper. I will be going to the writing center as well once i complete my whole draft to fix any other things to have a great paper. I feel that this peer review helped me.